After presenting our pitch, we were given the opportunity to receive feedback from our teachers and peers, with comments regarding strengths, weaknesses and targets.
Strengths:
- We received strong positive feedback regarding the visual style and colour grading aspects of our concept. Our classmates felt it was "Easy to determine what would be conceptual and reality. The colour grading is a strong idea"
- Narrative themes were also received well, as the audience liked the idea of engraining the binocular theme within the treatment. The twist regarding the loneliness of the female protagonist was also highly popular
Weaknesses:
- Although we had positive feedback regarding our locations and our selection of them, it was observed that many of our locations would be "weather permitting", and was suggested that we plan for the worst by finding other possible interior locations.
- Despite the romantic nature of the protagonist, concern was expressed at the nature of his endeavours, perhaps coming across more stalker like than loveable outcast
Targets:
- Consider potential alternatives to our current choices of location, based on weather difficulties
- Look into ideological representations of our characters and look into ways of making them appear more aesthetically pleasing, through devices such as costume and props
Well done - your pitch was excellent - well prepared, clearly communicated your creative vision and underpinned by meaningful research. Excellent work - demonstrating a strong group collaboration.
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